You and The Rain
a drop, two drops, three drops and a millon drops of rain . .
they always greet and bring You and I an enjoy and happiness
their smell and cold accompanied us at that moment,
when we danced under them.
when we talked about anythings under them
when we laugh, and when we were sad . . .
your smile united with them, and there's a peacefullness I could feel
they were like created a romantic moment for us
oh...what a happy moment I can be beside you and them
now I'm missing that moment so much, when we could play in a joke
I miss the rain, I miss You
This-Freak,Disgusting-poem is dedicated for MAS and RAIN...
maaf, I'm not in the mood to accept your critics about my terrible grammar . .
thanx .
I M Y S M, mas. . .
Yah, kalo grammar ga boleh dikomentarin...
BalasHapusDua jempol deh buat puisinya... :D
apik banget
BalasHapuskeroso banget :'(
makasiii cinpeee makasiii . . .padahal grammarku amburadull pe . .heheh
BalasHapustapi keroso banget , aku emoh koyo ngono mba :'(
BalasHapusha?emoh piyee to pe??emoh kangen yang berkepanjangan koyok aku ngene ki?hehe . .
BalasHapus